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Post by Niara on Aug 10, 2005 17:43:27 GMT -5
I'm not much of a story writer, but occasionally I like to write a poem or short story. I enjoy writing, but with longer stories I can never seem to get going. Here's one of the poems I wrote one time when I just randomly got an idea and wrote it down. I like horses, so it's obviously horse-related.
The obsidian mare runs free tonight, Upon a hilltop she stands. The ivory moonlight encounters her ebony coat, Giving it a silvery sheen. Royal and regal yet wild, As she stood there with defiance in her eyes.
The night-mare runs free tonight, A phantasm, An illusion, A dream.
The shadow mare runs free tonight, A blur on the horizon, Now faded from sight.
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Post by Shades on Aug 10, 2005 17:50:06 GMT -5
Wow I really like that poem, really sounds nice, almost like a song.
-Shades
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Post by daena on Aug 22, 2005 14:15:06 GMT -5
I really love this poem and can relate to thee. *Smiles softly* I, too, am a lover of equines. Beautiful poem, forsooth! I pray to see more of thy work anon on these pages.
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Post by Eolith on Aug 23, 2005 9:08:15 GMT -5
Oooo! I'm so proud of my little sis! *hugs her* See? They like it . I think it's worthy of publishing if you ask me. I didn't know you liked horses Daena. My sis and I practically worship them! We're at the barn at least twice a week, riding our horses.
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Post by Shades on Aug 23, 2005 11:36:08 GMT -5
Niara is your little sister? Whoa I was gunna say I was not expecting a sybling combo on here for awhile lol, well tell you sister to post more she is a good writer.
-Shades, Admin.
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Post by Wolf on Aug 28, 2005 11:53:40 GMT -5
Great Poem, it fits together smoothly and I can picture whats happening in my head really clearly Well Done! I like horses but not that good at riding...yet!
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Post by Shades on Aug 28, 2005 14:43:43 GMT -5
I love riding bare back, and I'm a man for all those who don't know, bare back races are fun as hell man.
-Shades, Admin.
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