Fletcher
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Don't worry, my sanity is locked away in the bank, far from anyone. Including me.
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Post by Fletcher on Mar 21, 2006 18:37:48 GMT -5
You Ask Me Why
You ask me why I call to the moon, The glowing ball of white? You ask me why I sing with my pack, Why I hunt for my food?
I ask you this. Why do you kill my fellow wolves? Why do you scare away all my food? Why do you steal my land from me?
No longer will I linger with one, Who can ask me why, Then stand back, and let their kind... Murder Me.
For all the wolves that died because of humans.
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Post by Shades on Mar 21, 2006 21:32:47 GMT -5
That was good, not great, i think you can do far better, but it is very good, keep working at it.
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Fletcher
Newbie
Don't worry, my sanity is locked away in the bank, far from anyone. Including me.
Posts: 74
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Post by Fletcher on Mar 22, 2006 18:48:10 GMT -5
Ok, I'l attempt my 'Much Better' It's an old one, and I just felt like sticking it somewhere before I forgot it.
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