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Post by Eolith on Oct 8, 2005 7:28:17 GMT -5
Yes, that's it. But because 'the young god' isn't really a title, it is correct for it to be lowercase.
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Post by coffee on Oct 8, 2005 14:19:24 GMT -5
Hmm. You may be right. I'll look into it some more, try and figure out which of us is right. I do have the feeling that you are though, lol.
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Post by Eolith on Oct 9, 2005 10:58:45 GMT -5
What do you mean I may be right? I'm always right! *flicks hair behind shoulder like arrogant models these days* ;D
Need I bother say 'I'm just kidding'?... I didn't think so.
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Post by coffee on Oct 9, 2005 12:22:56 GMT -5
What do you mean I may be right? I'm always right! *flicks hair behind shoulder like arrogant models these days* ;D Need I bother say 'I'm just kidding'?... I didn't think so. lol. *bows* Yes maddame. So 'young god' does not need to be capitalized. You were right. |
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Trajet
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Poetry is my escape
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Post by Trajet on Feb 17, 2006 0:31:23 GMT -5
I haven't had any inspiration for the story so far, but I was wondering if this seemed like a good history for the world which this takes place in. I was hoping to make it my prologue, If I were to ever finish the story and maybe get it published.
In the beginning, there was nothing.
When the Creator was born into the void, he smiled and sparked the creation of the realms. To help achieve his goals, he made from his own essence another like him, this one he named, The Architect. When life began to flourish in the realms the Dragon Lords were made, brought forth to be the rulers of mortal kind. And they did, but it was not a tyrannical rule, for there were many Dragon Lords and all of them lived as equals with mortals.
When the Great War began, it was a battle between the immortal Dragon Lords and their half-breed offspring who called themselves Gods. The gift of foresight was a valued one and when the Gods discovered one among them was gifted with the sight, the Dragon Lords could not fight them off any longer. And so the Dragon Lords were banished into another realm, those among them who had the ability to return could do so only in spirit form. The Creator and The Architect observed the war, they predicted the outcome, and then accepted that they were no longer needed and left the realms.
The Gods grew in numbers and claimed the highest realm as theirs, calling it the Sky Realm. In time the older Gods would die out and keep their history secret. Thus, the Gods ignorant of what they had come from thought themselves immortal and truly ruled as Gods among men.
I would just like the reader to understand that Trajet and others like him are not Gods as we would understand them to be, but more like demi-gods from Greek mythology.
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