Fletcher
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Don't worry, my sanity is locked away in the bank, far from anyone. Including me.
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Post by Fletcher on Mar 26, 2006 9:41:01 GMT -5
I don't actually like this one, but what thy heck...
Yore. The tune that echoes in our mind. Echoes through halls filled with what happened.
And what happened? What sparked the entry of the rising? What called the life, of those Once dead?
Can't you see it? Can't you understand the beauty? Can you find the meaning, of the Wicked dances or Yore? Can't you spy the undertone through all the brightly shone dances The mystery. The grey note sounding. The wicked dances of Yore.
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Post by Shades on Mar 26, 2006 16:18:07 GMT -5
Thats really nice!!!
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Fletcher
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Post by Fletcher on Mar 26, 2006 16:51:27 GMT -5
I think I used the word Dances too much in this part Wicked dances or Yore? Can't you spy the undertone through all the brightly shone dances But I don't know a synonim
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