|
|
Post by Hana to Yume on Aug 20, 2005 20:51:13 GMT -5
Just a random haiku I wrote for a story of mine...It's supposed to be a priestess' prayer, that just turned out as a poem.  Heavenly spirits, may evil be purified to reach salvation. Nothing too fancy. ^_^ |
|
|
|
Post by Shades on Aug 20, 2005 22:31:01 GMT -5
Thats pretty good, I myself cannot write Haikus no matter how hard I try lol
-Shades, Admin.
|
|
|
|
Post by daena on Aug 20, 2005 22:43:47 GMT -5
Oh Lady Hana! It is a beautiful Haiku. Honestly and truly beautiful. I love thy words and the whole idea of what the poem places in the mind. Very touching and lovely. And thou said'st thou couldst not write poetry.  |
|
|
|
Post by Shades on Aug 21, 2005 11:25:52 GMT -5
And thou said'st thou couldst not write poetry. yaa what was that about? You can write fine, and it sounds excellent, so quit being so hard on yourself. |
|
|
|
Post by Hana to Yume on Aug 22, 2005 23:22:56 GMT -5
Thanks so much Daena-chan! You too Shades. I didn't think my poetry was that good, lol. ^^
|
|
