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Post by daena on Aug 17, 2005 20:24:24 GMT -5
So...then I shall give to all of ye a taste of my work, and humble doth I seek words of criticism. I give to thee The Star, a Haiku I wrote some time ago.
The Star
Darkness behind lids. Thy luminescence blinds me -- Thou art still my star.
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Post by Shades on Aug 17, 2005 20:38:53 GMT -5
OMG THAT HAS TO BE THE MOST STUNNING HAIKU I HAVE EVER READ.
-Shades, Admin.
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Post by daena on Aug 20, 2005 17:00:21 GMT -5
*Blushes deeply*
Thou art too kind, my lord. Truly. I thank thee for thy laud, the poem is special to me.
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Post by Shades on Aug 20, 2005 17:38:17 GMT -5
I would bet, thats probably the opening poem of your up and coming anthology
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Post by Hana to Yume on Aug 20, 2005 20:47:47 GMT -5
Nice haiku, yeah! If I could write poems that good, I probably would've aced last year's English class. ^^:
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