The Obsidian Mare

[Niara]

I'm not much of a story writer, but occasionally I like to write a poem or short story. I enjoy writing, but with longer stories I can never seem to get going. Here's one of the poems I wrote one time when I just randomly got an idea and wrote it down. I like horses, so it's obviously horse-related.

The obsidian mare runs free tonight,
Upon a hilltop she stands.
The ivory moonlight encounters her ebony coat,
Giving it a silvery sheen.
Royal and regal yet wild,
As she stood there with defiance in her eyes.

The night-mare runs free tonight,
A phantasm,
An illusion,
A dream.

The shadow mare runs free tonight,
A blur on the horizon,
Now faded from sight.

[Shades]

Wow I really like that poem, really sounds nice, almost like a song.

-Shades

[daena]

I really love this poem and can relate to thee. *Smiles softly* I, too, am a lover of equines. Beautiful poem, forsooth! I pray to see more of thy work anon on these pages.

[Eolith]

Oooo! I'm so proud of my little sis! *hugs her* See? They like it . I think it's worthy of publishing if you ask me.

I didn't know you liked horses Daena. My sis and I practically worship them! We're at the barn at least twice a week, riding our horses.

[Shades]

Niara is your little sister? Whoa I was gunna say I was not expecting a sybling combo on here for awhile lol, well tell you sister to post more she is a good writer.

-Shades, Admin.

[Wolf]

Great Poem, it fits together smoothly and I can picture whats happening in my head really clearly
Well Done! I like horses but not that good at riding...yet!

[Shades]

I love riding bare back, and I'm a man for all those who don't know, bare back races are fun as hell man.

-Shades, Admin.