You Ask Me Why-crit please!

[Fletcher]

You Ask Me Why

You ask me why I call to the moon,
The glowing ball of white?
You ask me why I sing with my pack,
Why I hunt for my food?

I ask you this.
Why do you kill my fellow wolves?
Why do you scare away all my food?
Why do you steal my land from me?

No longer will I linger with one,
Who can ask me why,
Then stand back, and let their kind...
Murder Me.

For all the wolves that died because of humans.

[Shades]

That was good, not great, i think you can do far better, but it is very good, keep working at it.

[Fletcher]

Ok, I'l attempt my 'Much Better' It's an old one, and I just felt like sticking it somewhere before I forgot it.