The Last Of My Kind

[Wolf]

The last of my Kind

Why do you hunt me?
The last of my kind,
Why do you hurt my loved ones?
As I run you're always there like my shadow,
They're all gone, am I your only prey?
What have I done to deserve this, can I not Live free?
But all I see are the stars-
The immense pain in my head thundering like deer.
My vision growing cloudy, the stars fading.
You stand there laughing, never stopping,
Until my shallow breathing stops forever,
Never shall the world hear my howl.....
Again.


That was one of the first poems I wrote properly about Wolves.

[Niara]

Great! Wolves are one of my favorite animals as well. Keep up the good work!

[Wolf]

Thanks I love Wolves! ;D

[Shades]

Cool Poem very nice and simple.

-Shades, Admin.

[Wolf]

Hey thanks

[Shades]

No Problem, it isn't hard to tell the truth.

-Shades, Admin.

[Phantom Rose]

Good poem, you can read it quite fluently. =) Wolves are such beautiful animals, I hate when people hunt them...

Just one thing - you put 'you're' instead of 'your' in the fifth line. (I have an annoying habit of picking out mistakes like that).

[Shades]

Well it isn't a bad habit, nice to have an editor around.

-Shades, Admin.

[Wolf]

Thanks I'll go change it.