Love of Death

[xandiac]

I would love you with all my heart
Only if you would say
I would fall at your feet in worship
If you’d only called my name

Now it is too late
You’ve fallen out of reach
I long for your whispered voice
And search now in the deep

I see you lying there below me
Under the cold misshapen reeds
The icy waters chill my mind
My heart and wrists, they bleed.

I lie now on the misty red
Waving the current to and fro
An see your face beside me
In the arctic winters flow

I hear you call my name
As I drift now in the dark
Burning hands they pull me
From your warm embrace

I see the lights above me
I hear the sirens roar
Your face, it fades before me
As I waken once more

Now you are gone
And it’s far too late
To even see your smile
I close up inside dark shell
My sanity left behind

[vermilition]

this aint half bad
a bit sad though
but there is no chorus
could you work on a chorus?