Some Kind of Peace

[coffee]

I wrote this a few days ago. The song is about my feelings basically. I'm aslo using quite a few metaphors here, so don't take everything as is.

Some Kind of Peace

I see my life / bringing me tears
I see darkness / its so very near
I see my love / its crystal clear
I see my pain / over the years

It’s trapped so deep inside
Unbearable most of the time
Oh, I need a release
I need some kind of peace

Like a hole / a big black void
Like a knife / its my favorite toy
Gonna get hurt
Gonna feel pain
Its my doing / when I go insane

It’s trapped so deep inside
Unbearable most of the time
Oh, I need a release
I need some kind of peace

I need a place / just to call my own
I need a place / away from my home
I need a place / far, far away
I need a place / where I can say…

It’s trapped so deep inside
Unbearable most of the time
Oh, I need a release
I need some kind of peace
I need some kind of peace
Oh, I need a release
I need some kind of peace

[Trajet]

I like it, it's good. First off, I guess the best thing is that it doesn't seem forced, I hate when you have to piece a song or poem together and it sounds unnatural. Second, I could picture Linkin Park singing this, really.

coffee said:

Mike:
I see my life / bringing me tears
I see darkness / its so very near
I see my love / its crystal clear
I see my pain / over the years

Chester:
It’s trapped so deep inside
Unbearable most of the time
Oh, I need a release

Mike:
I need some kind of peace

Chester:
Like a hole / a big black void
Like a knife / its my favorite toy

Mike:
Gonna get hurt
Gonna feel pain

Chester:
Its my doing / when I go insane

It’s trapped so deep inside
Unbearable most of the time
Oh, I need a release

Mike:
I need some kind of peace

I need a place / just to call my own
I need a place / away from my home
I need a place / far, far away
I need a place / where I can say…

Chester:
It’s trapped so deep inside
Unbearable most of the time
Oh, I need a release

Mike:
I need some kind of peace
I need some kind of peace

Chester:
Oh, I need a release

Mike:
I need some kind of peace

Sorry if I mutliated the song with my comment of LP, but it just shows that it's some quality stuff.

[coffee]

Well, I'm not a fan of Linkin Park, but they have made it big, so if you think the song is that good, right on! lol. Thanks for the comment Trajet.