Unreliable Tango.

[josh]

There it is, and we dance.
Here it comes, just take a glance.
It won't hurt, oh no, no it won't hurt.

This, oh my, just make it quick.
Please, there's, it is.

Unreliable Tango,
Baby, dance your unreliable tango.
Dance your way over here,
Come in off that street,
Streets of convoluted thought,
Dance to me.
Dance your unreliable tango just for me.

That's reception,
oh, that tango's sweet.
Can I find that one,
Mmm, oh, ha,
Just is prevalance,
especially when that,
That's reception,
oh that tango is just so sweet.

Come on and dance that tango,
do it just for me,
do it for the ever clear.
Mmmm, oh, ha.

Take the hopelessly hopeless,
and We reach,
We reach for the ever clear.
And we tango.

Unreliable Tango,
Baby, dance your unreliable tango.
Dance your way over here,
Come in off that street,
Streets of convoluted thought,
Dance to me.
Dance your unreliable tango just for me.

Hmm, please, I can't do it,
not without you.
Unreliable, and concerned.
Don't say 'fore, get.
There it is again.

Singing our harmonies,
relating our voices.

Dance that unreliable tango.
Mmmm, oh ha.

[Shades]

Okay that song as far as I could tell was a 10/10 for technicality, and form, yous tcuk to the form that you started with the whole poem without breaking it once, and it had a flow to it.

Also the term unreliable tango is catchy!!!!

That was a very mature poem and enjoyable to read, Josh are you gunna enter anything in the contest, you have a very good chance of winning with this kind of writing, the entry max is 5 poems, or stories, or a mix of the both.

PM me if you are going to enter and which poems you want to enter into the contest, because these are stellar.

[josh]

Sounds like a plan, yeah I'll enter that contest, but as it so happens, I'm about to go jump in a cab to take me to the airport, I won't be on for a few days, maybe later tomorrow night at earliest.

Catch you cats on the flip side.

[vermilition]

considering ive just watched an episode of fraiser where niles does an amazing tango scene
it seems aparent
i like it
truly passionet
i like it

[Shades]

all goes back to that tango eh? alright catch you later josh.

Just go ahead and post 5 things in the contest section.