josh
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Post by josh on Aug 12, 2006 18:01:08 GMT -5
revolt! and Recoil. protest! and Accept.
Oh these wonderfully, these beautifully, well equipped words.
describe! and Forget. banish! and Tame.
Eloquence dear, is a lacking trait.
Begat, Begot, oh you had. You ever destructive, totally unequivocal, uneccessarily truthful, abstract noun.
Thyme is the relative of the day, the spice of a life which begs to be forgotten.
Forget it, but remember, left with those words, those ever so clever words.
hide! please.
Major! minor relative
let's... hmm
Let us.....
let's just.......
just. Hide behind these, this, pretentious, there, theirs, artful
, our facade|
Remember the words, so eloquent.
the words of daring, and the ones that cared.
Past tense? please...
rolled tents?
Caressed tense? humm
with, held.
hold!
bold and touche.
remark! and Tie
cascade! and I am
PRO!fessional! and Mime
CREATE! hmm........................ eloquent?
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Post by Shades on Aug 15, 2006 13:13:22 GMT -5
and I am
PRO!fessional! and Mime
CREATE! hmm........................ eloquent?
I LOVE THAT!!!!!!! THAT LINE AND I AM PRO! FESSIONAL!! AND MIME CREATE!!
IS ABSOLUTLY PRO!fessional! lol
i like this poem alot, it had a very about way with it, it was easy to read, and rolled off the mental tongue if you understnad that,
8.5/10
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