My Many Poems

[faith]

Here, read your heart out. There's only four of them, one of them is written by my best friend, not by me. Go here;

www.fanfiction.net/s/2883706/1/

and read all four chapters. It's only on fanfic because it seems to fit and I wanted someone to recognize my poetry. Hope ya'll like it!

[Shades]

First of all Faith, Plz don't post a url unless it is absolutly needed, I can see why u did this time, but next time plz don't.

Second of All, very creative way to post it.

Third of all Very nice poetry, have anymore?

[Eolith]

I liked it too... but I've only gotten to read the first one so far...

[faith]

Thanks! And sorry about posting the url, I'll just post the poetry next time. Here's one I just wrote, getting the first line from a random first line generator that I use to help me get an idea. It's really strange, so don't be too confused:

of cowards and riddles

In the furrow of reason the cowards riddle,
A man will say "Riddle me this"
And the cowards will run
And duck their heads
And lapse into prayer
Without reason
Without reason
Riddles make no sense

Use your mind and you will
Understand
Why I say
"Riddle me this"

So many a man got lost in these riddles
A coward in his own home
Coward, A coward
A miserable coward
Hiding from all that could hurt him
Confuse him

Scare him

Lose him

Beat him

Choose him

Hit him

Abuse him

Or anything of the like.
Just to say that he found the answer
Which would have to be a lie
Because the answer is wrong
Because it never happened
It was all a dream
But now this man realizes
That he is truly a coward
Only a miserable coward

Yeah, I'm not sure what I was thinking when I wrote that. I also have this:

Left Lonely

We were both left lonely,
That day by the sea.
And Heaven knows why,
I will always remember.
The smell of the sea,
On the day we were left lonely.

I can remember the easy things,
Like smells and colors and words.
I can remember you left first,
But I can't remember why,
I didn't chase after you,
Begging, pleading.

'They' always said not to have too much pride.
And I think I've learned my lesson.
Never again will I hesitate
Or waste a moment
Or try to forget.

The bad things in life are the best times.
You'll remember them always.
I know I'll always remember.
That day by the sea.
When you left.
When I left.
When we were both left lonely.
Alone by the sea.

[Eolith]

W.o.w.

I don't read poetry much... but comparing yours to what I have read, it ranks right up there with the top. Really, each line is... poetic. -laughs- I'd better stop gushing or you'll think I'm just saying it to be nice. I don't know, maybe I haven't read enough poetry. I'm not the best one to be judging... but I do really like it. ;D

[faith]

Thanks! I've entered a few contests, but I haven't won anything yet. I'd love to get published, but I don't really think it's going to happen.

[Eolith]

I think it'll happen! Gosh darn it. If you don't think it'll happen, it won't. That's one of the most classic words of wisdom.

[Shades]

Okay Faith U are very talented but I want u next time u write poem to stay away from the repeating the same line twice, for some reason I think it is lazy, but apart from that omg thats great stuff keep posting ur stuff, but post it in a new thread plz!

[faith]

I do that mostly for rythm. When I first started writting, it did seem silly to repeat a line, but now I just kind of have to, or else my rythm is off.

[Eolith]

I think it adds emphasis...

[Shades]

n argh i donno It bugs me so much, I dont mind where u repeat a stanza like a hook or something but the same line is like, dont be lazy, but amazing poetry good job