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Post by carltonthe1st on Sept 7, 2005 13:53:27 GMT -5
Why do you have to shut me out, I am here for you. Don’t you know that? I have always been here, I will never leave, Can’t we get through this?
We have all had mistakes in our lives, Does this one have to be so big? It was just an accident, it’s never happened before. Believe me, this will never happen again.
I didn’t mean it to happen. Haven’t you been tempted before? It was such a sudden thing, I won’t leave the toilet seat up again. I promise
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Post by ♠Kari♠ on Sept 8, 2005 22:48:45 GMT -5
Wow beautiful!!! I kinda dont get it but... BE-A-U-TIFUL!! lol
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Post by carltonthe1st on Sept 9, 2005 0:36:24 GMT -5
the "big mistake" is that he left the toilet seat up. i tried to set it up as if it was something else, like, him cheating on her or whatever.
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Post by daena on Sept 9, 2005 17:20:27 GMT -5
*Grins lightly* Sir Carlton, this piece was me funny...and I liked it. I did, at first reading, think it was of thy subject cheating. When I read that last line, laughter bursted forth from me. Great poem, I love the lightness of it.
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