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Post by Eolith on Oct 30, 2005 16:44:22 GMT -5
WOLFIE!! *strangles wolfonline in big hug* I didn't expect to see you here. Anyway... maybe I better read your post... hehe
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Post by wolfonline on Oct 30, 2005 16:56:28 GMT -5
Yes, it would be good if you read my post, Eo...
*gasps for air*
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Post by Eolith on Oct 31, 2005 18:46:22 GMT -5
Cool. I like. There's a few gramatical errors, but that's okay.
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Post by Eolith on Nov 1, 2005 8:48:55 GMT -5
So why did the dude decide that he wanted his daughter back?? Just so he could have an heir? He's pretty tough. 'Father' might as well mean 'My lord' the way he's having her say it.
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Post by ♠Kari♠ on Nov 1, 2005 18:17:26 GMT -5
I would scream at him if he made me call him father. I mean.. with knowing me.. i probably wouldnt go at all. He sounds horrible.
But thats really good so far i sat here reading it and ignoring all my messengers.
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Post by Eolith on Nov 6, 2005 11:14:06 GMT -5
Shouldn't she be a shadow mistress? Lol, I'll shut up. Pretty good though.
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Post by ♠Kari♠ on Nov 7, 2005 17:59:48 GMT -5
Lol i actually agree eolith. That dad isnt the brightest bulb. (ssshhh its the dad naming her not the writer!) Shes very brave... I wouldnt be. Lol.. geez!! I didnt know people our age could be such good writers!!
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Post by Eolith on Nov 7, 2005 21:42:51 GMT -5
It's all in the mind-set.
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Post by ♠Kari♠ on Nov 8, 2005 22:07:05 GMT -5
Then my mind set isnt very bright.
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Post by Eolith on Nov 9, 2005 7:52:25 GMT -5
Yeah it is! You shouldn't say that. I know two geniuses that could write awesome stories if they wanted, but they don't have the mind-set for it. They don't have the patience to write it all down. I wasn't any good. My first story was about a girl entering a unicorn land...
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Post by ♠Kari♠ on Nov 9, 2005 20:31:46 GMT -5
Lol! Unicorns are good. To tell you the truth I really dont know what mind set is.
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Post by Shades on Nov 9, 2005 23:22:20 GMT -5
What Eolith means by mind set is that if you put yourself in the story, you'll write the story ten times as good, like when i wrote Grief for school, silverpen.proboards60.com/index.cgi?board=hor&action=display&thread=1123547146Best story thing I have ever written, that and sasquatch which is in the same area, but then you look at some of eolith's stories and theya re just as good if not better, but a different style, all you have to do to write, is put yourself there. -Shades, Admin.
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Post by ♠Kari♠ on Nov 11, 2005 22:34:44 GMT -5
Riggghht. I knew that. Im still waiting for wolfonline to write more.. yay!
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Post by ♠Kari♠ on Nov 12, 2005 21:12:30 GMT -5
Oooo I want that room
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Post by wolfonline on Jan 6, 2006 17:04:47 GMT -5
Yeah...this story died, so there probably won't be anymore installments...sorry people...I'm actually going to delete all my posts now.
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