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Don't worry, my sanity is locked away in the bank, far from anyone. Including me.
Joined: Mar 2006 Gender: Female  Posts: 74 Location: Look Behing You... Karma: 26 |  | Revenge « Thread Started on Apr 15, 2006, 4:43pm » | |
((Not sure if I am alloud to do this, but...))
The wind wound lazily through the evergreens, bound by air biting with cold. On the ground, snow frolicked, no longer white though. Blood stained the floors, and I dropped to my knees, letting loose a cry of suprise. Bodies littered the ground, tossed aside like so much trash.
I stood up with a start when someone began to choke. Dashing over to the noise, I discovered a young boy clinging to life. "T'was them!" he gasped, life slipping away. "The Shadows! They crept from the deep, we didn't even know they was coming. Ye must run!" Blood caught in his throat, and he violently began to cough. I watched helplessly, but knew that nothing I could do would save him.
I stood up when the boy's soul departed. A cold, thin blade of metal touched my throat, and I surpressed a shriek.
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like this phoenix we shall rise from the ashes...
Joined: Nov 2005 Gender: Male  Posts: 1,341 Location: does it come with cheese??? Karma: 202 |  | Re: Revenge « Reply #1 on Aug 16, 2006, 6:40am » | |
sounds great fletch i wood encourage you to finish it but i might be seen as a hypocrit...
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