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« Thread Started on Mar 17, 2007, 1:07pm »
As soon as I get more of it finished, I have a story I am going to post. It has really been bugging me that I cannot think of a title though. The book is about a girl named Aislin and her sister Morganna. Aislin meets a young werewolf named Gabriel and they are close friends. Aislin introduces Morganna and that's basically how it starts out. Aislin and Gabriel are going to have a romantic relationship and I was planning on Aislin and Morganna being turned. Does anyone have any ideas for titles? I was thinking about "Crimson Regret" but I'm not sure.
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« Reply #1 on Mar 17, 2007, 10:00pm »
-prods- Hi.

I like Crimson Regret though it does sound somewhat ... , eh, I don't want to say cliched,
maybe unoriginal? I've always liked the word 'claret' which is a type of wine [I think] and a synonym for crimson, colorwise. If you want to work that out. Claret-- it sounds so purdy, don't it? But other than that I think you should stick with what you've got. "Crimson Regret". Tis good. =]
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« Reply #2 on Mar 19, 2007, 2:53pm »
-prods back- heya. I was worried that it would sound a bit cliched. Ahh! I totally just figured out what's going to happen at the end today! POI! -ish so excited-
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« Reply #3 on Mar 19, 2007, 7:40pm »
POOOIIII. <3 That's good, but I don't even know the beginning. O_o;

Good luck, post it if you can and you'll be rewarded with some harsh critisism! >=] Buahaha! Nah, I'm sure it's good. ^_^
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« Reply #4 on Mar 27, 2007, 5:45pm »
I fear harsh critisism. Just kidding. I will post some...I think....yes, I probably will. Well, you heard Jens opinion. She doesnt like it, regardless. You should have heard her in the car. She was ripping in to shreads becasue it was not how she wanted it. XD
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« Reply #5 on Mar 28, 2007, 1:50am »
Well we arent Jen, post it, if it sucks i'll help you tweak it a little bit if you want, otherwise you'll eventually get better at writing, plus it probably isnt near as close as you make it sound
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« Reply #6 on Mar 29, 2007, 2:38pm »
Meh. I might post some this Saturday actually. I wasn't going to, but 'tis better to tweak it bit by bit, don't you think? I don't have time to right now, but I will try Sat. Thanks Shades, that means alot. And I'm glad that you aren't Jen. ;D
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« Reply #7 on Mar 29, 2007, 2:40pm »
Alright good good, i'm looking forward to it, i'm going to lock this thread, so make a new thread for your story k? :)

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